Today in class we wrote an essay. The essays prompt was a bit lack luster but wasn't my actual complication. Since I wrote it on paper it was much harder to skip through my essays like I usually do. I also write slow. Anyways, I stated off by choosing a position then making 3 claims, which was my thesis. Next, I began to write my first body paragraph. In the body paragraph I started with the claim. I then found evidence and explained my evidence twice. I ended the paragraph with a conclusion sentence. Sadly I didn't make it much farther.
Today in class we talked about space. It was cool to see the universe. It also is like anxiety invoking. Its crazy to see all the other galaxies, it makes me think that there has to be another life on earth. Overall I loved todays topic.
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