Today in class we wrote a body paragraph. to write a body paragraph you need a claim. The claim you use will come from your thesis. After you state your claim you you will need evidence. In this case the evidence will come from the sources provided. Next, you must explain your evidence, and connect it to your claim. Then , state one more piece of evidence and explain it. Lastly, you must conclude the body paragraph. I have a problem with explaining my evidence, and not repeating the same things.
Today was a gloomy day. On gloomy days I tend to drag throughout the day. Multiple times I was tempted to fall asleep. Once getting to your 4th period and seeing the poetry for us to analyze I immediately got discouraged as it isn’t my strong suit. Eventually I gave in to the temptations. I may have missed important information but i’m confident I got the bulk of the lesson. I’m hoping for a more upbeat lesson tomorrow.
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