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Reflection: 2-8-22

Today in class we scored responses to yesterday’s assignment. The first essay we scored was a 2. That’s because they failed to analyze the strategies, had a lack of development, organization and a lack of control. It was only 1 long paragraph. It also didn’t have enough info. The second essay we scored was a 6. The six is the score that we all strive to get. The second essay had adequately analyzed the strategies. It only had lapses in diction.

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