Today in class we scored responses to yesterday’s assignment. The first essay we scored was a 2. That’s because they failed to analyze the strategies, had a lack of development, organization and a lack of control. It was only 1 long paragraph. It also didn’t have enough info. The second essay we scored was a 6. The six is the score that we all strive to get. The second essay had adequately analyzed the strategies. It only had lapses in diction.
Today in class we talked about space. It was cool to see the universe. It also is like anxiety invoking. Its crazy to see all the other galaxies, it makes me think that there has to be another life on earth. Overall I loved todays topic.
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